Firestalker

Yup, Nate too kind to do that. :lol:

A.k 5 kept levitating towards them aware that the vampire was following him. Then suddenly A.k 5 spotted them. Travelling through the forest trying to be unseen. A.k 5 smiled.

What happened to the story???????????????

The biggining was good, middle bad and the end was good.

Wow this is good. Continue it please. (PM me when you have)

Sorry this is not my kind of story. Try making it clearer.

This is a complement. This is the strangest story i ever read. Improving it would be making it longer.

Is'n this a story?? if it is a storybook (RPG) then you have to have some rules or a profile etc. I will contact a moderator.[/code]

Zander stood there watching Alaura train. Zander sat down and started meditating. Concentrating to gather his power to one place. he kept concentrating until he felt half of his power ...

This does not make any sence improve and i will check it again.

wow, this does this include poetry?

1 make it a little longer. 2 No mistakes in grammer. 3 Lack of discription at some points. Well thats it.

"I have a way to boost your powers and can teach it to you if your willing" replied Zander "No, how do we know your not lying" Asked Eliera "You ...

"Who is this" asked Falcon "One of the assassins i was talking about" replied Ladreal "She doesn't look like an assassin" said Falcon smiling "Want to bet?" asked Karana "Where ...

Ahh Kylan so your back from TW, how did you like it there.