Firestalker

Zade I sensed my friends teleporting to a place near me. I teleported their. "Tas your hand" I said Tas held his hand out recovering from shock and surprise. I ...

Zade "Don't be a rat Zade" Said Strewt "Your the rat" I said "Oh really? Well what would you say if i told you i would let you go if ...

**No problemo** **Hope you don't mind this*** Zade "Let me go, Please!!" I begged "Zade, Zade, Zade. I didn't even dream of a powerful mystic like you becoming a pirate" ...

Interesting great story. Will you continue it? Anyway as far as i saw the only mistake you made was seperating the paragraphs at the wrong place. 1. It was as ...

**Yeah me too. I wanna know please** ***The curiosity is killing me*** Zade I walked up the stairs and looked if i could site land. no use. Well its worth ...

Great story. Hers a small critique It has(had) been made more powerful than any sword has(Had) a right to, through crushed prayers, betrayal, and tears of blood. My hope soon ...

Zade I laughed out loud at the thought of Tas being hunted by a mage. "what are you laughing at" asked Tas angrily "I cant believe it. Your hunted by ...

Wow that was great. Hers a small critique for a great story. 1.All he could do was stand there, two bodies [lay there] side by side. Two girls, reaching the ...

**Writers block. Curses**

I loved it both books. But after reading that thread full of reasons not to like Eragon or Eldest i get what people mean by copying. But anyway i still ...

"So where is this archive" asked Daklana "Its in the amazon" replied Zire "Where in the amazon?" asked Daklana again "Well its nowhere yet everywhere" replied Zire "What does that ...

Zade I walked near Tas and then whispered "The The Necklace of Axymalz, what is it?" I had heard that name before, but i didn't know what it was. "Tell ...

Ariel noticed that Anne stayed away from the werewolf and stayed close to only the vampires. And even then she looked scared. Thinking it was nothing he just followed the ...

Zade "Oh so thats it" I said walking into the room Tas was my captain and he had to be seen to. I cared about my friends. I had sneaked ...

"We are going hunting. Want to join?" Ariel asked. He was surprised that Anne looked more scared after he had said that.