Firestalker

First of all i must say that you better point out to the reader where and when the flashback stopped because it confused me a lot. You should add something ...

Once high enough we kept the plane in cruise and started the ritual. I put on the metal glove and then fitted the syringe onto the top as Gwenlock put ...

Thanks for the critique again. Now i fulfill my promise "don’t deny it!” he snarled and I felt like he'd slapped me. His eyes were devouring it seemed, they had ...

Hope this is I woke up screaming, again. It was the same vivid, reoccurring nightmare I had been having for months. I waited a moment or two to slow by ...

*I LOL-ed when reading that post* :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: "Why Gwenlock didn't you like it" i said laughing "Very funny" commented Gwenlock "Yes, I've never laughed so much in ...

*Good idea :D * **I'll add to it** "well there is a good side to this too." I said suddenly "And what is that?" asked Gwenlock, Maria turned to me ...

Okay lest see if what Hopeful_Youth said is true as its 12 midnight now. Hope its not though :shock: (what boy shouldn't it be 'a' boy?? not sure here though) ...

wow the prologue is interesting. I guess its about cats. And is reminds me of a book i read similar to this, when i mean similar i don't mean you ...

Hey there Natalie. Nice to meet you. I see this is your first post. We warmly welcome to YWS. :wink: :wink: Zwelkov had an extreme obsession and knowledge of the ...

Ooooooooh A vampire lover Well then I'm honored to critique But first of all if you have got this idea from the film Underworld or Underworld:evolution then it should be ...

I am back :wink: :wink: . By the way our groups will meet together, trust me. As long as Malissa keeps drinking Vampire blood we will be bound to come ...

**Guys, Serenity and Amber i mean. Mostly Serenity as she's the creator. First of all you know you can trust me on posting in storybooks about vampyres. Second next time ...

Hey mimitley, Welcome to the wonderful realm of YWS. Like to write songs eh, that’s a rare talent you know. Not being able to writing the long novels because you ...

If Mallisa really drank vampire blood then she will eventualy become one of us. I need to go i will post tomorrow as soon as possible. :wink:

Get together people we need more members to focus on the topic of this storybook. = The war Between Vampires and Werewolves and Humans. Either those who are posting post ...