Firearris

One more person! :D

Yay! :D I can't wait to start once we get those last two.

Hello, Fallen! Very, very good! I like it. :) The only part that really bugs me are her legs. They seem a bit too skinny, especially at the knees. Otherwise ...

We need three or four more people at least. D:

Are you playing a character, Ray?

Hey Jynx! Nice poem you have here. :) The only thing I noticed that you should look at is your syllable counts. What I mean by this is that when ...

If we don't end up getting a sheep anytime soon, we could possibly start without a sheep, and find the sheep later?

Hey, Kattrain! Very nice and interesting poem you have here. :) I actually can't really find anything wrong or anything to critique about this except for one part that bugs ...

Hello, Fell! A few things bug me in this poem. One of them is that there is no capitalization or punctuation at all, maybe look into this some? Also, I ...

Hey, Wondering Kate! :) Nice poem, but its a very recycled idea. Otherwise, I think all that needs to be fixed is the punctuation. All the corrections are in bold. ...

Hello, CreativeFreak! Very nice and interesting poem, only one thing I noticed. :) I want to be a star, n oticed by others. Seen everyday. The 'N' needs to be ...

Hey, Mo! :) Okay, very nice poem here. Only one thing really bugs me, and that's the 'End' at the end. Is it actually part of the poem, or are ...

Hello, Ollie! Very nice poem! To tell the truth, I can't find anything wrong with it. It's quite a nice and interesting poem. :) I'd have to say the last ...

Hi, Riot! This poem is very nice. :) It has lovely rhymes and a nice sound to it, and your grammar and punctuation is great. Only one thing bugs me. ...

Hey Corwin, Welcome to YWS! Very nice poem, I think the main thing that needs to be fixed is punctuation and grammar. In the days in which I'm dieing , ...