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Hello there, emmylou1995! I like this poem. You did really nice with it and managed to show what you wanted to say/the story that was going on quite well. =D ...

Hey there, Durrie! =D Woah, this is really cool. What program did you use to make this? I really like this, but her face seems oddly shaped. I'm not exactly ...

Hello there, Allmixedup! =D For the most part, this is a decent poem. The only main thing that really bothers me is the lack of capitalization, especially in the 'I's. ...

Hello there, Heartbooks! Ah, I love your poetry. I think you did really good on this. The only thing that bothers me about this poem is the punctuation. Not every ...

Hello! I also have to agree with Lilymoore here. What you currently have is the shell of a possible poem, though I like the idea you had! I think the ...

Hello there, Kingolions! Nice poem, except for a couple mistakes in your punctuation. I walked across the sandy beach, and far away I could see , [Change to a period.] ...

Hello there, Irishfire! =D Oh, wow. This is a really awesome picture. I love the angle you picked for this. =] Also, that looks like a really, *really* awesome place. ...

Hey there, Allmixedup! =] I like this. It's nice and somewhat different. It's still got the style of a arrow through the heart, though that isn't exactly an arrow, and ...

Hey there, Heartbrooks. :) Ah, yeah, I believe I read this in your blog, if I recall correctly! =D I really like this poem. Romance/love poems are kind of common, ...

Hello there! I like this. It's very emotional, and nice, though it's almost more of a free-style poem. The only thing that bothers me is how repetitive it is with ...

Hello there, Butterfly! :) Okay, lets start with a few corrections. Science was boring, so was English, maths, religious education, history, geography and whatever other lessons me and Dylan did ...

Helllo there, Lydia! =D Wow. That's just really awesome, haha. A whole lot better than I could do. Out of curiousity, what program did you use to create this? =D ...

Hello there, Ultraviolet! Okay, you did pretty good on her. I have to say, I like the way you did her pants and face. The only issue I see is ...

Hello there, ChiquitaPeroPicosa! Ooh, this is neat. I like the colour contrasting and the way you photo-shopped it. =] That's a pretty neat thing to stumble upon, in my opinion, ...

Helllo there! =D Ooh, this is a very interesting picture, I like the angle you picked. It's pretty unique and almost strange, but in a good way. =D The only ...