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Firearris

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Stories by River Shields

    Hello there, Rivercool99! I'm Firearris (Or Heather, whichever you prefer!), and I'll be your reviewer today! I have to say I liked this poem. It's short but it kind of ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketches? Photos?

    Oh wow, these are really neat, hahah. I honestly don't see anything I could say that could help you improve with your sketches, you have quite a talent. You did ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Part 2 of fighting gods,saving lives and abit of.....

    Hello there, Butterfly! I have to agree with Kyllorac. You should get something like Open Office or maybe use the Spelling Check build into the YWS posting system, as well ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A letter to the departed

    Hey there! Alright, for the most part you have stuff like punctuation mistakes, so I put my corrections and suggestions in red in the quote below. :) Sunday 6 Th ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Abandoned Places You'll Never See

    Hey, guys. These pictures were posted over a year ago. o.0 You should try not to dig down and bring up new topics, because sometimes the author/creator doesn't like that ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Busy Jack Frost

    Hello once again, Junglelover! =] Lovely pictures here. =D First Picture: This one is nice, but I think the sun draws your attention too much, so you don't really pay ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: a tapestry of textures

    Greetings, Jagged! =D Okay, this is pretty neat, haha. It's unique and kind of strange and random, but I do like it. The thing I like the most about it ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Heart

    That's strange, Lily, Durrie. I can see it still. =/ Maybe she needs to upload it straight from her computer, and if that doesn't work, check what she has it ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Exams

    Greetings, Robz, and a late welcome to YWS! I'm Firearris (Or Heather, whichever you prefer), and I'll be your reviewer tonight. =D Nice poem, haha. It describes exams quite well. ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: To my friend Nathan a.k.a Nova

    Greetings, NeverendingPages! I'm Firearris (Or Heather, if you prefer!), and I'll be your reviewer tonight. For the most part I like this poem, except for one little thing. The 'He' ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To Say Something<3

    Hello there, Pacific_Sky14! I'm Firearris (or Heather, if you prefer), and I'll be your reviewer tonight! I believe I've seen other works of yours, and I've always been a fan ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Express

    Hello there, papersolstice! I'm Firearris (or Heather), and I'll be your reviewer tonight. =] For the most part this is good. The poem itself is very good, and the only ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Adding Color

    Hello there, once again, Kota! Just to let you know, you might want to do some critiques. It's best to do 2-3 critiques for every one work of your own ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Begining Dream

    Hello there, Kota. I'll be your reviewer today. =D Okay, this is nice. Short, somewhat simple, but good. There is only really one thing that bothers me, and that is ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A peom of lines

    Hello there, once again, allmixedup! Okay, once again you need to capitalize things. I find it somewhat hard to focus on the poem with all those lowercase letters, especially the ...

    Jun 6, 2010


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