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Hey there, ndioro! Interesting piece you have here. :) His eyelids were half closed, and long strands of brown unshorn hair fell on the covered with cold sweat forehead. This ...

Hey there, LostMagi! I quite liked this piece, really. At the end, I expected the girl to survive - and I didn't really expect her to be pregnant. Overall this ...

:( My measly amount of points will not amount to much. Quick! Do some reviews and get more points. :) I'll definitely be participating. I only have around 4600 points, ...

Hey there, Terris! Wow, these are pretty awesome. I personally find drawing people to be quite hard, especially when it comes to facial features, hands, and keeping the anatomy realistic. ...

Hey there, Hawkie! This is a good start! It definitely needs some work and refining, but you've got a great start for this prologue. If you are reading this, then ...

Hey Boolovesyou. I'm Heather, and I'll be your reviewer today. :wink: Okay, in general, this could use some work with the proper grammar and flow. This is also a relatively ...

Hey there, Lele! Overall, this is a pretty good piece. I kind of like the idea/message you're giving with this - but I do have one thing that I would ...

Hey there, Blacksheep! It's nice to see more of your work. These are both pretty good, though there's a little bit of room for improvement on both - but mainly ...

Hey there Artemis, interesting piece you have here! It was ideal in many ways, but it had few issues. The way you put this makes it sound like it doesn't ...

Hey there, Blacksheep! Woah. I really like this drawing, especially the way you did the woman's hair. Face: I think you did really good with the face, especially considering how ...

Hey there, Twinseed! Here as requested. dank Mind until You actually don't need to capitalize the "M" in Mind, even though it's the beginning of the line. It's not the ...

Hey there, Twinseed! Overall, this is a pretty good piece, especially considering the word limitation you had. I almost wish there was more to it - maybe you should consider ...

Hey there Griff (mind if I call you that? :D), and welcome to Young Writers Society! My name is Heather, but your free to call me anything you want (I'm ...

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