FireandIce326

Girl: I would love to be a fish, And swim through all the seas! Or be a bird who flies around, And nests high in the trees! Or I'd be ...

I deffinatly like this. I agree with the others that I could imagine the picture. I also like the formating and how it is centered, something differant I don't see ...

Eternal life is such a good lie, But in the end we all must die. The life that is lived, has no better meaning, Than if we were dead, and ...

Thank you, prehaps if i chaged it to... Trapped in the ice, Nothing could sufice. would that be better?

Hm... I thought this was good. But I hate to say it was a tad hard to read with the way it was written. Don't get me wrong, this was ...

I liked this :D And yes this is based off of a very well know poem lol. Well that doesnt matter, you made it your own! Just because someone made ...

Ok, so this is pretty good. Who said death isnt an angel? Higher than the others, an archangel? ik someone said it before, but it is bugging me as well. ...

As far as writting, I like it! Unfortuantly, as far as poetry, well its not the best. But dont worry! I think this has much potential! You wrote it is ...

Wow... I have to say, I really like this! :D ... You say you haven't written before? If you had not of said that I would not have guessed that! ...

In time and space, I saw your face. In a burning fire, I saw my desire. Trapped in the ice, Nothing could suffice. Bound in a cage, I found all ...

If I had to say three letters, To you before I die, Then I would have to pick, First I then L then Y . They stand for how I ...

Wow, the flow of this was very nice. 8) I don't have anything bad to say about this. Just keep up the good work!