FireandIce326

Hey, and I would like to say, yes yes yes! I loved this poem. Besides the spelling stuff the other guy pointed out this was great! The formatting and rhyme ...

Hello there! Wow I liked this so much! i just love how you had both perspectives of you and your parents. It had strong emotion and that made for good ...

I like this a lot. It was very well written and I like how you wrote it. I really could feel emotion that went into this piece and that's what ...

Hey there! I liked this! :D having read this then the above comment, I agree with them, breaking it up would be nice, then there are a few grammar mistakes. ...

To understand what can't be understood, Is very hard to say the least. Like making bread rise, Without the yeast, Impossible....

Hey there! I thought this was pretty good! I only agree with the guy above about your spelling, punctuation and all that stuff =P, emotion in a poem makes all ...

Hello there! Ya I agree with Smashles. It was a bit confusing at parts. But I like your word choice, and I like how you worded it as well, even ...

Hey! Very nice, I liked this, there is only one thing I didn't like to much. The meaning is wrong,there's no reason why The logic is gone,it's hard to deny ...

It is supposed to change tenses, but I guess you are right about the title =/

This was alright. Parts of it didn't make sense really, like again the anger not making noise? And when I read the last two lines they didn't make to much ...

Ya, instead of writing all I want to say is wrong with this, I will sun it up and tell you that pretty much everything I want to say is ...

I thought this was very interesting. I liked the thoughts that you put on here, In my opinion the flow wasn't to great fro me. But you made it the ...

Hey, I really liked this! I think I liked this mostly because it sounds so..... true, for lack of a better word lol. I also like the concept of glass ...

Hm... I'm not exactly to sure what to say about this poem. You covered the caps and other stuff haha, but that didn't even bother me to much. Now I'm ...

Like like like! Lol, this poem is so kool. I'm not sure I, or many people for that matter, would have come up with this concept. I can't really think ...