FireandIce326

Hello Hello Hello! I found this poem rather nice! Personally I love wishing on stars, so that made it even better! Haha. As far as nit picky stuff, I saw ...

Hello Hello Hello... This was good, and also very thought provoking. It is on the shorter side, but it is better to have a good short well written poem, then ...

Hey, this was well written. I do kinda agree with the comment above, it is a tad hard to read with the words being in white and all. But This ...

Hey! I thought this was very good! There is only one bad I would like to touch on really quick. You touch her neck and kiss her gently without a ...

Hey there! I liked this poem! It was very nicely written. I like how at the end of every stanza you repeat the phrase. I don't have anything bad to ...

Hey! Ok so while reading this I found a few mistakes that are a quick fix, everything I saw is noted in parentheses I've had friends before I know that ...

Hello there! Your poem was interesting. The rhyming and flow kind of through me off a tad. It felt as though it kept changing, and it confused me a tad. ...

Thanx XD

Hey Hi Hello! This was quite an awesome poem! I enjoyed reading this very much. But in my opinion there was one thing that wasn't bad, but could possibly be ...

A dmiring you M ore A nd more everyday R ealizing my love for you. V irtually life is I ncompossible without V alidity O f your love anew. C ...

Hey there! I thought this was good. There was only one thing I was not to pleased about. When you wrote love doves at the end of the one line, ...

To the one who knows the heart of mine, Knows to live in peace and love divine. For in thine eyes you are more than treasure. My love for you ...

Hello hello hello. I thought this was quite enjoyable to read! I agree with sassykat. The no capitals was kinda weird for me. There was few punctuation, and that seemed ...

Hey hey hey! I enjoyed this! I like the formatting and the rhyming scheme. I could kinda feel the emotion put into this. It also had a very nice flow ...

Hey there! This is pretty good. Not great but good. My favorite part were the two lines at the end. I like how they were secluded, it brought more importance ...