FireSpyGirl

Will you please review the first chapter of my book? It's called A young spy and A young cop

Firanna cautiously entered a room and finding it empty, closed the door behind her. She needed to get a grip. Hearing voices, she stands up, hand on her sword hilt.

((Thank you!! Kira is 5'7", long red hair with a black streak in it, usually in a braid, but she has it down now. She is wearing a long sleeve ...

Kira opened a door and stepped through. She stopped when she saw the others.

((May I join?))