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  • Lyric Poetry Re: I don't know what to do

    This is very expressive but indirect. That strengthens the emotion of your words, though I agree that a broader variety of wording could fortify it even more. You show a ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Individual lost

    Many thanks to you for your compliments, but it was a brief moment of lucidity at best. And it should not be wasted. I'm trying to enlighten people to what ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Individual lost

    A short, old poem on the beauty industry's influence on society. If someone could offer me a little constructive criticism, I would be much obliged. Oh pretty rose How you ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: And crawling in the sites database...

    An internet aphid, called Justin Bliase! Greetings to you, fellow young adults! I join you today because of the encouragement of a friend and a love of the written word. ...

    Jan 11, 2011


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