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  • Lyric Poetry Re: I don't know what to do

    This is very expressive but indirect. That strengthens the emotion of your words, though I agree that a broader variety of wording could fortify it even more. You show a ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Individual lost

    Many thanks to you for your compliments, but it was a brief moment of lucidity at best. And it should not be wasted. I'm trying to enlighten people to what ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Individual lost

    A short, old poem on the beauty industry's influence on society. If someone could offer me a little constructive criticism, I would be much obliged. Oh pretty rose How you ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: And crawling in the sites database...

    An internet aphid, called Justin Bliase! Greetings to you, fellow young adults! I join you today because of the encouragement of a friend and a love of the written word. ...

    Jan 11, 2011


Someday, everything is going to go right for you, and it will be so wonderful you won't even know what to do.
— Hannelore Ellicott-Chatham, Questionable Content