Feminition

All complaints about the blueprint of your story have been answered. However, being born in Russia, I'm sort of insulted at some of the assumptions made in this. My mother ...

This is a fairly good concept, and you've managed not to make it boring. The chapters are a bit short, though, but you manage to put something interesting into them. ...

Your grammar is flawless. You manage to get the correct sentence structure, punctuation and word order without any problem, and your spelling is equally fantastic. The story flows fine, you ...

This was a very interesting idea, and the reader could quite pity your characters. However, grammar errors dotted it, and it started out rather slow, to be honest. Not bad ...