Feminition

All complaints about the blueprint of your story have been answered. However, being born in Russia, I'm sort of insulted at some of the assumptions made in this. My mother ...

This is a fairly good concept, and you've managed not to make it boring. The chapters are a bit short, though, but you manage to put something interesting into them. ...

I love it when society's antagonists are turned into protagonists. That's why I loved the HBO miniseries House of Saddam, as it made me actually like and pity Saddam and ...

Your grammar is flawless. You manage to get the correct sentence structure, punctuation and word order without any problem, and your spelling is equally fantastic. The story flows fine, you ...

This was a very interesting idea, and the reader could quite pity your characters. However, grammar errors dotted it, and it started out rather slow, to be honest. Not bad ...

Welcome to the site! I was intrigued by your username, which seems like an amalgamation of feminine and premonition. And also because you mentioned historical themes and sci-fi, two very ...

I'm really flattered by the replies! I've already read the rules and such, so I'll probably start reviewing, then. I'm really seeking a place to get rid of those annoyances ...

I will totally, totally reply at least 5x more than I post, I assure you. No worries. Also, chat speak for me is a no-no, so you don't have to ...

Hey, I'm a fifteen-year old named Anna, and I really hope to become part of the community. I'm the opinion editor of my school newspaper, have always loved writing though ...