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Seriosly Chirantha... If i ever meet you i`ll stay at 2 m away from you. *I don't wanna die young!* Ah, Yes! I got my own. Today i meet the ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS. Start enjoying! My name is Akayl but my buddys call me Zy (dunno why o.O ) I write mostly fantasy stuff. Need any help, review, question ...

Hey! Well good luck with finding other... topics ! :lol: My name is Akayl and if you need any help PM me!

are you intending to write a whole book in rhymes ? o.O Just asking.

haha ... Rock song you say? *giggle* maybe i`ll put it at the lyric stuffs :P

Amazingly done. This would be a great story written in prose. Maybe you should consider wrapping it in a story. It can become very powerful. I read your first part ...

cheers for the review! I`ll start editing asap.

Cheers, Anzius! :P

I got a black (custom made *giggle*) notebook. I write everything there. It`s kinda messy cause when i get an idea i just open at a blank page and start ...

I will read any of your stories. I don't wanna die of hiperventilation because of 2 hour laughing. *Kidding* It is a great idea. Nothing to point out. I`m waiting ...

Ok. The review : 1.) At first glare i saw that you use a lot the word "said" - try giving tips about who`s next in the dialogue - example: ...

sure! I`ll get them done.

Ok i`ll do my best. If i don't finish today i`ll surely finish tomorrow.

Don't worry! I`ll always help me fellow writers ...