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Fortunately before they noticed that the orange people undressed their clothes.

Ok this is the best chapter of them all. Descriptions, actions and reactions. Nothing to say or to add at this part. And yes - the name in the LOTR ...

Review: “You’re… you’re the Warrior Queen,” Fallyn sputtered nervously. All thoughts of not showing weakness was all gone now. The floorboards creaked as Fallyn shifted her wait to her other

This freaked me out! C`mon! At least tell me there will be people popping up in the back of the main character. Seriously. I was reading this chapter with the ...

From what you told us here i could give you just a "poor" title - Sun's touch

I got a drawing of mine with all of my book character in different chapters. I`m kinda proud of it 8) - It's way to big to post it here. ...

*Raising an eyebrow.* Nothing bad to say about it. Just need to be smoothed a bit here and there. 1.) At the first glance - You say that she was ...

Prologue! Even with a broken arm I am here to review *the mouse gliding on the pad underneath the plaster*. It`s well written and you wrote enough to drawn the ...

It`s well written for a prologue. Needs some clean it a big and put more descriptions : I stood there surrounded by an endless marsh of mud and these marshes, ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS! First of all the main rule here is to post 2 reviews before you post 1 of your work and to maintain that ration. Second of ...

Hmm... Ready? The review : Books, vases…everything was being thrown around the room. I was on my way through that room when a book came hurling at me. You`re lacking ...

I think you didn't notice that I am not reviewing poetry, but anyway you asked for a review here it is. As much as I can do. And...dust... As ...night, ...

The worst book(s) ever read by me - Narnia series. I finished all 7 off them in 2 days -.-` and i had hard time following the action and the ...

Yes you can Pm people, but try making it at the persons that you know or have given reviews before (on your works). Or you can always go on Community ...

Fortunately ghosts are already dead -.-`