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Re: Scavenger - 1.3
o.O I`m the second who reviews your story. Not saying that it's a contest :D ‘My stable –’ - I would suggest you decribe his reaction. Maybe the hesitation of ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger - 1.2
Oh! here I am at the second part. First: Again well written and so. Nothing to say about your way of writing, but... *oh Jesus! Here she goes!* It was ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger - 1.1
Even with a broken arm I`m here to review *mouse gliding under the gyps*. :!: I was so interested by the math hour that I had time to read this ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
I need to review... Any offers?
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Avargorn: S.S - Chapter 1 (part1)
I`m sorry this took me so long. I had trouble at translating and I know this chapter is not my best. Tell me about the gramm, but i`ll appreciate if ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: BloodLust chapter 1 part 1
I saw it!! YAY! I`ll review it tomorrow cause i`m way to tired tonight. Luck! -Akayl
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: Well this shouldn't be! Prologue
:O - please tell me that you didn't wrote that! If you did then I ... oups... you got a lot of work to do. I don't know the plot ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Done Olivia! if you need anything else just Pm me and i`ll get it done.
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Forunately the giant man found another island with no french around.
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 2
Hey. First of all very nice idea and writing skills. Second the things that you should do to improve it a little: 1.) You should write something about what Jamie ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Looking Glass Ch. 5
Hey. Amazing story... Really extraordinary! Now... the review: They are small and petite... "small" and "petite" means the same thing. You`ve just changed the language. you something that [s] you ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
done! :)
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: The Mansion chaptr 6 part 1
:smt026 *the crowd yelling : Part 2! Part 2! Part 2!* :smt026 - Then i`ll review it all. Luck! -Akayl
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: How I survived high school: Chapter 2; part 2
Ah! The second part of the second chapter... Let's see what trouble you three got into now -.-` “Stop that!” Aanam slapped my hand, lightly. “Why? Roma said so?” - ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: how I survived high school: Chapter 2; part 1
Hey. Glad to see that you posted chapter 2 :) *glow eyes* First grammar: It miught have something to do with the fact none of us could catch a seat. ...
Sep 29, 2008
