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Re: advice please ! (:
Well. I`ve been involved in a car accident - no comment (lucky to be alive! Geez!). First of all you need to creat the feeling of terror, of fear seeing ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Carved Bone - Chapter 1 part 1 - Edited
I haven't posted Avargorn `cause I`ve been busy and some chapters are working are hard to translate so I have to actually write them in english. And to answer you ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: I do not sleep.
Sure. I don't mind, but remember it`s Blizzard Entertaiment `s poem so don't use it on other forums without telling that. - Akayl
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: And They All Fall Down EDITED
Hallos Sea! As usual I`ll start with the good things which are that what you wrote is quite good thinking at the story line, characters` acting. You lack the feeling ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Carved Bone - Chapter 1 part 1 - Edited
Ok... This is my first vampire story. I need all the help i can get. Cheers. - Thanks Firestalker! - Thanks Lord Anzius! Chapter 1 - Pure blood - EDITED ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Done. Great that you like it :) NEXT !Luck! -Akayl
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Looking Glass
Salve! Let's see your work :smt023 Loads of things that you can add. In this chapter the drawing thing that you made in the first 5 chapters fades and with ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Class hour for young writers
Hey! A friend of mine is giving a class hour this Sunday for young writers guidance, discusions about character development in other words every thing that means writing. If you ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Need any help? Take a pick!
Well in this time of pure boredom I kinda decided to help the "new flesh" to improve their writings and when I say "new flesh" I mean the guys under ...
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: The Mansion chaptr 6 part 2
Hey, mate! Looking for a review aren't you? :) Well here I am still with a broken arm :roll: I walked into a café called elf house. The café had ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Awakening
Hey. Long time no see. First nice part of a story ... now the review :) My comments will be normal and my adds and rewrites in bold . All ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Done TL. Hope it helps. Luck! -Akayl
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Fight for Lyrria pages 1 and 2
First story? Welcome to the Club, girl! :) Don't worry about it. We all (at least the ones that see it) will help you improve your style and so on. ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
Salve! I was looking for something to read and saw this fragment on the Home page. So at least I can do is review it and tell you that you ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Bloodlust Chapter 1 part 2
Hallos! Sorry I forgot about this. I took my time and reviewed it properly. Here it goes : So the main character is a girl. Ok. Being a boy and ...
Oct 30, 2008