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Avargorn is the name of the sword . The sword gave him a mark... Ilith ends up in a strange room being ... dead... but his brother resurrects him by ...

Ok sorry... Don't cut off my head. I don't wanna die young ... Btw This is actually the very end of the book. I`m not from any country that speaks ...

Great job. The review ... but the devil's road is still in sight. I would change it in But I know the devil`s wrath - gives an extra rhyme and ...

Cheers! Nice ... I must admit this is very nice. Great idea but i would rather change a little To love, trust or just bow to. To love, to trust, ...

I know it`s kinda unfinished (this part) but i`ll try to edit it as i write more. Ty for reviews. “How happy you are, wretched mortal…” Hands were holding him ...

Yea... I`ve been active *clap*. When i start writing i can't stop so forgive me if i`m going to write like an obssessed human being. You want to know what ...

Banned for ... trying to ban some1.

Yea ... writing books, novels, poems ... i would really want to take a break ... when i`ll finish it i`ll post it or not...

He probably did not notice it. You scared the poor bloke. He`ll probably never write again. The dialogue. Fine. Check spelling and the things that Lord pointed out and from ...

Ok ok. Calm youself! :) i`m gonna go buy it tomorrow ... probably this week. Cheers for your replies m8

Actually i never read Eragon... i didn't knew about the mark similarity... i`ll post more and you will catch up that the actuall story is nor LOTR nor Eragon.

“Breathe!” He awoke, but didn’t open his eyes, not daring to leave the pleasant numbness that was left in his body by the not-yet-finished sleep. He stretched out, perplexed and ...

Very nice idea... The poem is very alert and it finishes very quick. The verbs, rhymes are fine but i would suggest the punctuation to be changes as the person ...

Hiya! Would ya take your time if you can and review my little part of my book`s ending I would really apreciate. Cheers!

For the person above. It`s a prologue... You don't describe a lot in this part of a book... you just present the reader some of the main characters and an ...