Fellow

The review is coming up: Do you love me with your heart,/Or love me with your eyes? Strong and simple. Nice. Was i cute from the start,Or did you listen ...

First. Very nice idea. Second - the review: 1.) The title doesn't match the actual poem. 2.) I dream a dream where dreams have dreams/And dreamers never die-- Nothing to ...

Welcome to YWS! I see that someone told you already about the rules so its useless to point them out as well. If you need any help or a preview ...

For the first piece of fantasy it`s quite good. But i got some tips to point out. 1.) To "release" that feeling of fantasy, magic, of a world that it`s ...

hmm... 8.50/10 -

Math hours could bring you at the brink of insanity!!! Its cold… silence. For the first time in my life I feel alone like every one is gone. They dragged ...

Welcome to YWS. I hope i`ll see your writings around here asap. I`ll make sure i`ll be the first or if not, one of the fellows that review. :) Enjoy ...

Well... I wrote a book and I did wrote "The end" . The hundreds and thousands of ideas can come and make one single book and its more than enough ...

And Lord Anzius. Wait for the story to unwrap itself will ya? Ashea and Nayn will show up at some point! *giggle*

Its about you? Auch... sorry about that. Great that you have the power now... :)

Yes still writing at it. And no i will not marry you... i`m still 17 :) and i dont even know you.. so badluck

Nothing to point out. The rhymes are fine, the words aswell ... Its a very used idea but yours is original in the rhymes way. Ah. The punctuation... you don't ...

Yes he can't speak. And yea ... i`m rather like Fellow in the book (exept the part of stealing things).

Prologue It was a cold night in the middle of the winter and it started to snow slowly with big snow flakes that covered the village in a blanket of ...

great song... I`ll try to make a guitar song for it if you don't mind.