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*roll on the floor laughing* Well you can ask and wait for an answer ... but don't upload the darn Apocalypse here pls.

The classic elves - An elf is a creature of Norse Mythology. The elves were originally imagined as a race of minor nature and fertility gods, who are often pictured ...

To return to stars - Repeto Stellae . I think it is fine this way. Not sure tho`

The idea is great. Needs so processing tho` : If hw ould have had the will If he would have had the will, Nit to kill the man who was ...

5/10 - I don't get it.

Ok you need a review i`ll do my best. I looked up into the sky hoping for... something... anything. It was dark and cold, too cold. A small bur started ...

Poor guy... His world is upside down -.-` Mike turned his head from the troll to the pixie. “Oh! How rude of me. Jack this is, Nel. Nel this is, ...

*giggle* Funny. Made me smile... Again a little problem with the descriptions - I don't have a picture of that gnome made in my head. The dialogue- again the problem ...

The view was beautiful, as the sun was just rising from the east, and as it hit the snow making a bright and beautiful glow. I sighed looking at the ...

Jem - Once in a life time

Good point Clo. Golden years... Not that i got something against those blokes, but i think it`s stupid to cut yourself because you just think that the sky is a ...

Great story... I didn't get the "Death's just another milestone in my life...Nothing to be worried about." - Just the author`s words? I would recommend to describe Adrian a little... ...

Fortunately the ones that took benzodiazepine became addicted and made their own drug.

Ok I like the idea - writing a poem at the start of every chapter but as Chevy said its better to prose. Aspecialy if there`s something about light and ...