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Re: The mansion chapter 7 part 2 out of 2
Sorry I missed the last sentence of the story ... ish
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: The mansion chapter 7 part 2 out of 2
Hmm... “So what is this shadow you were talking abo-,“ I was cut off by Melody’s hand on my mouth, her face was only a few inches away from mine; ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Recommended Romance books?
"Jane Eyre" by Charlote Bronte - A soft romance mixed with childhood living of the MC.
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: The mansion chapter 7 part 1
Took me a while to get here, actually a month or so, am I right? Sorry :D Well you asked for a review so here it is: First of all ...
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Done. Anyone else?
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
Sorry for the delay. Busy with the holidays. Here`s the review you asked for. My personal comments will be with italic , add and examples will be with bold . ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Critique Booth Is Now Open
Well... It`s my new book that I started. Vampires, lycantrophs. werewolves... enjoy - chapter 1 - part 1 - chapter 1 - part 2
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Done. *smiles* anyone else?
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - Chapter 2
Ah... the second chapter! Hmm... You made it too empty this time. I'll point out and give you examples. Here it goes: 1. He realized that this ride was going ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Done! NEEEEXT!
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
To be honest my lower jaw just dropped in surprise... I haven't read such a good piece for a while. (Meaning at the "real life" form). Amazing descriptions, feelings, character`s ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
Done! Next??? C`mon I don't bite... to much.
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Liana Unbroken
Salve, Kaylyn! Long time no see, ay? Your review coming up! *You see a man dragging a body through the an open door behind me. I smile and close the ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - chapter 1
Salve! Well, you asked a review here I am! Before I start cutting and adding I`ll start with the usual stuff which are that this is a nice story, full ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Anytime, Anywhere, In every world.
I`m back in business. Exams are over and I`m thirsty for reviews! Hurry up.
Dec 19, 2008
