FeatherBlue

Wow, really great work! I was so absorbed into the story that I couldn't concentrate on finding any errors. O.O I thought the description was done really well and the ...

Okay, hello there. As I was reading through, I couldn't help but notice that some of it seemed forced almost, and it felt awkward and not as smooth as it ...

Interesting, but could use some more work. First, a space between new paragraphs and speaking/quotations would be nice and easier on the eyes. Organization is important. Readers tend to drift ...

Hello, this is my first review on the site, *is nervous* so I hope it can be of some help. :) I agree. It's looking really good so far and ...