FeatherBlue

Wow, really great work! I was so absorbed into the story that I couldn't concentrate on finding any errors. O.O I thought the description was done really well and the ...

Out of no where an old nursery rhyme and this scene found its way into my head. I adjusted the nursery rhyme a little. I know its really short, but ...

Okay, hello there. As I was reading through, I couldn't help but notice that some of it seemed forced almost, and it felt awkward and not as smooth as it ...

Thanks for the reviews and advice! I really appreciate it. Thanks BCG, and I see what you mean. Most of the poems I've ever written were for some school assignments ...

Just something I wrote a while back about writing fantasy type stories. I'm not much of poem writer, so I hope it's okay. -------- Fantasy I let fantasy take me ...

Interesting, but could use some more work. First, a space between new paragraphs and speaking/quotations would be nice and easier on the eyes. Organization is important. Readers tend to drift ...

8/10 So true.

Thanks for the welcome. :) Haha, I just pulled the name from the top of my head, and I'm glad to know that I'm not the only one suffering from ...

Hello, this is my first review on the site, *is nervous* so I hope it can be of some help. :) I agree. It's looking really good so far and ...

Hello, nice to meet everyone. I've been lurking around this site for a while now and finally decided to create an account. I really like to write a lot, especially ...