Fear257

As much of a fast-paced story as this is, I have to admit I know little of what's going on. As much as I could gather, two people are running ...

Great story. However, I noticed in the final paragraph, your opening to a sentence was "Unlikey, I there was". Other than that , it was great. I also wonder if ...

Hmmm. I'm finding that there are quite a few poems on here I'm surprisingly liking . Usually poetry to me is, well, bland and boring. However, there were a few ...

I found this to be a good begining to a story. There were a few things I think should be brought to your attention. The first is a spelling error ...

I enjoyed reading this. I really did. However if you'll allow me to be really picky about one thing. Your semicolon in the sentence "Money doesn't stop the gossip of... ...

Nicely done! No grammar errors that I can see, so you're in the clear there. I felt that this poem is rather true. People do have a tendency to see ...