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Re: I choose to throw the dice once again...
I found the poem to be insipid. There was not much emotion in the poem to enthral me. I couldn’t get into it; however, I did enjoy the first line ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: My death wish
Ok, retrodisco666! I can sense a slight influence from the Victorian Era. Your poem is imbued with deep meaning and symbolism that underlies the whole poem, which is what I ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Angel of Death
Hello, SwaggVicious! This poem is immensely morbid and macabre. I read the first three lines and said to myself, “This sounds like Josef mengele”, and I was correct. There are ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: DAY
I want to see the night life and its glowing ardor. I want to see the high scraping towers bloom in the moonlight I want to feel the elated spirits ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Let There Be Blight
I really enjoted that part. Sisyphus could have no greater pursuit than to stepoutside this room and roll right back in,ensconced with my winged brethren. Inferred from the title, this ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Guidelines for Thought
I look to the rosy ribbons of light, Just to find some profound insight. I dive into the realms of slumber, Just to endeavor a vision of wonder. Knowledge- It ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Momento Mori
I am a laugh that’s faded into Fleeting memories. Drums beat colors that float to bleakness. Watch the cloud rumble through the blue, Watch the bird fly, fly away into ...
Jun 24, 2010
