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Re: The Unseen Microcosm of the Food Industry
Food is essential to sustain life and to know where that food came from is important as well. The food industry today is one of the largest industries in America. ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: The Day when being was no longer self and meaning fled the s
Thank you. My influences are the Danish philosopher, Kierkegaard and Existentialism, also, my own observations of how society is spiritually and morally degrading. Essentially, it is a synthesis of so
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: The Day when being was no longer self and meaning fled the s
March, 15? The Day when being was no longer self and meaning fled the soul The camp was dark. The air was wretched and blood soaked the naked earth. The ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
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Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: xfgbfbxfgjdfb
ha ha the chew makes me spew I grew to a moo Speak of you down in the crew wiggle giggle goblins wisper little aleins tell me no go get ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Silver Moon
So hey, what’s up...again! This piece has a majestic air to it; I really dig it. Like everyone said: the metaphor about the sun and moon is great. That is ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Blood Infused Tears
There is a lot of imagery in this piece, its enthralling; however, it seems like all that glitter is shading the meaning of the poem (That’s just my opinion). I ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: A Deluge of Rain
Hey, Thefadedphotograph ! Like I said before, I really like your art; and, I enjoyed this poem a lot. Your art and writing skills are excellent. Just want to say ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Art Finished Over the Past Year
That is very impressive.....I like really like your work, and I rarely say that to anyone.!!
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: A walkers Time Bridge
Yea, theres probably quiet a few mistakes, I wrote it when I was in the 8th grade; it was a report. It was based on impression sunrise by claude monet. ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: That Summer
I would also agree that it sounds like a list more than a poem. It sounds like it would be in the song section.
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: DAY
This poem might be ambiguous in a few areas, I understand that, but I’ll try and explained myself. First: What I am trying to convey is how the city moves ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Guidelines for Thought
Does the rhyming scheme always have to be so stern? If the rhyming scheme is oddly constructed, but applicable, can’t it work?
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: If Roses Grew Where Petals Fall
Hello, Mercyemptyinme! I thought your poem was constructed very well; it has a wonderful vibe to it. It is immensely imbued in emotion and imagery. You are a very good ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: A walkers Time Bridge
Louie watched as everything he had ever known to be true disappeared with the coming of dawn. As the sun was setting Louie looked back on his life and contemplated ...
Jun 28, 2010
