Fatimah

Hi, I am guessing you are new at this as you have recently joined. First of all I would like to say welcome, and I hope you find that by ...

I really like this poem, however I will suggest a few changes. First off, you have barely used any punctuation, only full-stops. You should include more punctuation, commas, full stops, ...

This poem is pretty good, although I will suggest a few corrections to be made.. I'm not sure if you intended to go for some sort of rhyme, but the ...

I liked the fact that this poem is short and simple. Although the enitire poem never rhymed, the lines that did were pretty good :)

Heyy, I really enjoyed your poem. The last few lines were catchy, and I thought they stood out the most.. 'I close my eyes, Thinking how sweet love is And ...

Aw thankyou SilentOllie, I really appreciated your comment :)

Hi! Do you mind reviewing my two poems for me? May I ask.. You review peoples poems by just replying right? Or is it something else :P

Thanks for the feedback, I shall work on those points mentioned. First thing first, no more stealing lines from songs, from now on I'll try and keep it original. Secondly, ...

Thanks guys, I really appreciate your comments. I have taken them into consideration and I've tried to work on the points mentioned when I wrote my second poem that I ...

I quite enjoyed this one, but for future references I think you should try and develop your own rhythm so you can engage the audience. Keep it up :)

I’ve fallen too far deep, Where I can no longer find my way, Doing things I know I shouldn’t, Saying things I shouldn’t say. Sometimes I feel hurt, Sometimes I ...

Is having free will as good as we think, Or is it only to help us sink? Further down sealing our fate, Forced to live with the decisions we make. ...