Fatimah

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Hey there, Great poem I like the whole dark theme going on here.. No complaints from me! Keep up the great work :)

Wow Featherblue, all I can say is great job this poem is definitely one of the best short poems I've read so far! ' I let fantasy take me away, ...

Hey pencilgirl, Now this image definitely describes unhappiness in ones heart. I like your choice of colours, really simple ' black and white '.. Black is my favourite colour and ...

Wow this is really good MysticalBlood.. And what's special is the fact that you're only 14 years old! I only have one small criticism of your work, when shading in ...

Hi there, To the one who knows the heart of mine, Knows to live in peace and love divine. For in thine eyes you are more then treasure. - I ...

Will do, thankyou kogarasumaro143.. I will follow you and I hope you do the same! Welcome to YWS :D I see you recently joined ^.^

Thanks for the comment guys :) To chetanbhasin, I see your point and I will take your advice for next time.. Proofreading my work before I submit it I definitely ...

This poem is sweet and simple. It sounds like you wrote from the heart :) Keep up the good work ^.^

Hey there, This is a good attempt, so you're off to a good start :) ' You always know what to say to melt my heart and when Im mad ...

Hey there, First of all can I say I love your profile picture.. in motion. Very nice ! I quite liked this poem, but I suggest you use punctuations such ...

This is lovely Mizz, great work! I like the eyes on your drawing as they look like they could tell a story. I'm sure your 'little' cousin will love her ...

Thanks for your review Mizz! About the spelling mistakes, yes 'fluctuations' was spelt wrong :$ Can't believe I never noticed that :/ And I live in the UK, so 'realise' ...

I must agree with your comment DRdante, however what parts would you say need tweeking? I always thought I should try a different style and explore different rhyming styles, but ...