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Re: The Ocean
I have watched the water crash through our community, tearing a path for its swells of destruction. I have see it drown children and men alike - it has no ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Life is perfect
your work was on the sidelines of the website, and from all the wor's title, your stood out. LIFE IS PERFECT are the three rarest words in todays generation, and ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Detachment
i find dark themes really remarkable, and your work fit that category perfectly:D so i won't be able to find any fault in it. i am mesmerized by the way ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: The Night
you are only 15 and write this good:D i am amazed:D (in a good way:P)... the whole poetry revolves around *the Night* and you didnt stray away from that, which ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Coming Out as a Human
I had to defend both to James and to myself why I believed what I did. this line clearly states that you are a normal human being, having the on ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Hurt Beyond Repair
it's nice, but nothing clearly amazing. this is a topic everyone writes about, and to make a stand in this area, you have to be really epic. better luck next ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: When the Rain Came Home
i didn't find any gramatic errors but this seemed too simple to be your writing. i'm not pointing it out as a flow it just seemed to lack *lumi factor*. ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Like 98'
i have never been to spain, but your poetry makes me want to go there:D! i think that enough should be a great compliment. your vocabulary, your usage of it, ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: their cries
[quote][/quote] Ugh, makes me sick to think that anyone could agree to slavery. your this feeling is strongly expressed in the poem throughout. you have a strong style of writing, ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Sucrose
fantastic piece of work. everyone expects love to sweet, just like sugar. but you took those two, combined the idea of them into something deadly, something dangerous. i loved the ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Alcohol
probably i don't review like others, i think more about what you are writing, then actually looking for grammars and punctuation. nevertheless, the flow was extremely awesome, it didn't get ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Keep Your Hands off My Heart
firstly, i love your idea:D most of us end up writing about missing our loves, or wishing for our loves, or something like that. but you used amazing metaphors to ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: fate in a february grave
i don't think i have enough experience or ability to give you a review as other have done. but what i admire about your writing is, the darkness of really ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Wildflowers
you take a simple piece of writing, a really simple topic and uncomplicated style of writing.. I'd expect it to be not all that awesome. But I was clearly astonished ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Gayfriend. :3
i miss ruqaiyyah too
Oct 12, 2011
