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Re: Euthanasia.
lolz, this is not a reiview at all, just a reminder to let you know.. 1)how much i love reading your work
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Story told in Colors
Jeremy Baker walked down the well-known route to detention, the long corridor. “No one calls me Jeremy” he thought angrily, “it’s always that idiot, bully, stupid”. The dreary faded grey ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Cuts.
love love love love love love it:D:D:D
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Achromatopsia
your work has this power, power to attract the reader to read on more. although i haven't posted much work, i'm much more of an avid reader than writer, so ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: First day at school
A little girl stood in the enormous playground and looked at the school with utter amazement. Not only was she dazzled by the sheer size of the school, but the ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: The Dreamer
It isn't about the weight of matter being spoken. It's about being heard. this truly applies to this writing. simplistic, yet carries strength and deep meaning.
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Change
awesome:D! it has a revolutionary, rebillon feeling too it, without getting excessively dramatic. you managed to make it intence and compulsive in very few words. great:D!
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: She waited...
i loved your decription. but it was lacking the underlying emotion, the feeling i usually get when i read poetry. it seemed a bit too bland. but i'm positive you ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Let it Grow
the topic independence inspires me in so many different ways. this is one of the reason i was so mesmerized by the title, that i decided to come and read ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Paradox
They are very buggy, glitchy you could say i'm not sure if glitchy is a word. please recheck if possible:) glitch i'm 110% sure, but not that certain about glitchy. ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Two Weeks, One
normally romance keeps me on the edge, but this was amazing. seriously, people on yws are AMAZING writers.:D i love the way you described each little cute events. Just the ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: The Lost Embrace
Because you don't feel the same way because I want you badly I like your style of writing up to a point, especially in the beginning, when it seems like ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Weak Tears beneath The Blackest of Skies
If this was a novel in a bookstore, I’d buy it, just because of the title, and if this is how you continue writing rest of the novel, I won’t ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The Sound of Distant Thunder
Hey. First I’d like to begin by how breathtaking your work is:D someone mentioned that your writing is angry and harsh, but that’s what personally appeals to me in this ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: The Sky is Beautiful
But my body is weak; my mind decrepit with scars that run years long and not even time is at my side. Immobile in the cool sands of the desert, ...
Oct 15, 2011