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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Re: Gravity (Prologue)

    Wow! Nice job! I like the imagery you created in the first line by saying, "My fingers danced over the keys of the piano..." It gave me the image of ...

    Jul 13, 2013

  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Ragdoll

    Wow! Great job. It was very emotional to me! That always seems to happen with personal stories. Your story is kinda similar to mine... Ignored, seems like you have no ...

    Jul 13, 2013


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
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