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  • Short Story » General, General Re: In a Flash

    Hi, this is a really interesting start! It might be helpful to heighten the suspense to add some more desciptions of the screams. Maybe add a bit of drama/struggle on ...

    Jul 31, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In a Flash

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    Jul 31, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In a Flash

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Jul 31, 2018


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