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Fantasyfreak14

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Betrayal

    thanks! I kinda had to rush the ending because of timing issues. :/ I submitted this for 4-H. but now that i've already submitted it, i'm sure i'll find some ...

    Jul 20, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Betrayal

    The man groaned in agony as he tugged on the chains that held him. He should be close to breaking by now, if what my informants tell me is correct. ...

    Jul 20, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Panic

    thanks! I'll try to work on making it flow better.

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Panic

    Air rushing in and out of your lungs You don’t know how to react You chest is heaving a mile a minute Your heart about to burst out of your ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    1. Wheel of Time series by Robert Jordan 2. Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling 3. Mistborn trilogy by Brandon Sanderson 4. The Book Thief by Markus Zusak 5. Watership ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Here and There

    Dec 15, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Holding On (a Shakespearean sonnet)

    can't believe I haven't commented on any of ur stuff yet! anyways, I think I know exactly what this is about. though, it may or may not apply to u ...

    Dec 15, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Angel

    thank you! :)

    Dec 14, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Memories

    thank you! that makes me so happy to get a good comment! :)

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blood

    thanks for the comments. oh, and don't worry, I'm not self harming. our teacher showed us a slideshow of different pictures and we had to write a poem based on ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Autumn

    thanks for the comments. it was a villanelle, and according to my teacher in a villanelle the lines are supposed to repeat as much as they did. not exactly my ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Monster

    This is part of a story I may or may not write. I used it as part of a presentation for my creative writing class. I realize that it may ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Sunsets

    a petrarchan sonnet. the rhyme scheme is a bit different. it's like ababcdcd cdecde. ****************************************************************************************** I watch the sunset with

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Angel

    a poem written to the beat of the opening lines of the song "Mirror" by BarlowGirl. It was an assignment to write a poem to the beat of a song, ...

    Dec 12, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blood

    It's a bit short and could use some work, but I wrote it in about three minutes during class. the teacher only gave us that long. **********************************************************************

    Dec 12, 2009


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