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Lost I stray from the road I’m meant to walk on. My destiny seems so clouded, My life seems to be a con. The golden path fades, Browning to dirt. ...

Vote For Someone I’m told its the elections But for what? I’m told it’s the Government. But what's the big deal? I’m told I have to vote. But for who? ...

Megsug, It's great you finally found the prolgue (I read your previous comments). Some of the things you've pointed out are actually key elements of the story, except for some ...

Hi Okay... Answers to your questions first. I'm not sure. I think male since the waiter called him Mr. Quarts, but if he looks like a girl maybe his is ...

Okay, I'm done. Your grammar was pretty good. I'm impressed. I liked the story too. Yes it's cliche, but it's still good. And seriously, who gets bored by these stories ...

I've decided to type and eat, so here I am, reviewing Chapter One. Something that I forgot to ask earlier - how did Ayra know that Saphira was with the ...

At the moment, yes, this piece is very clichéd and not original. Now that you are six years older, maybe you can change that and create something unique. I'll do ...

Prologue Before the dark times, there was a lush green and bright time filled with light and life. It was the time of the Mystic Warriors. During that time there ...

A night to remember Sasha sighed slowly as she stood silently in the great room. Her crème dress was beautiful and perfect for the party that her parents had organised ...

The sun slowly sets, over the empty school, From the shadows, appears a darker shadow. Walking proudly, locking doors, gates, windows, Trapping the school within the darkness. The Caretaker has ...

Wow! You totally have me hooked in your story. I'm not really a critic, but more of a reader, and I must say; your story is really cool! It took ...

Chocolate Muffins and Chilled Iced Tea I remember this part so vividly. Possibly because of the chocolate, or the strong aroma from the tea; I don’t know why, but I ...

Encounter “Ahh! It’s HOT” “What would you like to order, Sir?” “Iced Water! And some vanilla ice cream!” “Sir, this is not an ice cream serving facility.” “What? No ice ...

What is life? Is it something that only exists once, or does it recycles itself over and over after it expires each time? None know the correct answer, but people ...

My spelling is terrible, I know. But that is because I am using a weird keyboard. I can't seem to type on it properly...?