Fantascifi66

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Under the broken stars, I breathe in One more burst of light. Colors whirl like apocalyptic galaxies, hurling shards from across the night. I closed my eyes and saw dulled ...

Under the broken stars, I breathe in One more burst of light. Colors whirl like apocalyptic galaxies, hurling shards from across the night. I closed my eyes and saw dulled ...

Under the broken stars, I breathe in One more burst of light. Colors whirl like apocalyptic galaxies, hurling shards from across the night. I closed my eyes and saw dulled ...

Congratulations @EagleFly !!!

Yes, of course! But I'll finish your previous request first though.

Ok, I will get to it soon, but I can't do it right now :)

Umm... Did you mean for me to review it, or manilla? @Liberty500

TryingToFindALoopholeInEverySituationAndBeingNerdyAndWeirdAndAwkwardAndALonerButStillWantingFriendsAndTryingToDoMyHomeworkButEndingUpWritingYetAgainAndOhMyThisIsAReallyLongWordI'mSorryBye!

@manilla You don't need to worry about my nitpicking. There's nothing to nitpick. That piece is absolutely beautiful. I don't even know how I'm going to write constructive criticism on ...

Yes absolutely! I'll try not to nitpick. :)

here, sorry :)

You could review if you want to!

All done @Liberty500

I'll get too it!