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Re: Two Golden Arches
"Literally, the place was called No Where City!" probably shouldn't have an exclamation point unless someone is yelling it. "I watched me curiously." I think this should be it (Unless ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: Voices
I really liked your story. I think that you need to use more sensory details. I want to know what this place looks like! I was also confused during the ...
Nov 25, 2014