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I love the new photo! Great contrast and imagery. ^_^

Lovely, Jenna! Her shading's a little off, and the anatomy's a bit quirky, but your style doesn't seem to pay as much attention to realism--which, given your general subjects, works ...

I think the first one would be better if any part of it was in focus. I know the carousel isn't supposed to be, and that works beautifully--but the background's ...

The first does, indeed, have a shape reminiscent of the Iberian peninsula! ^_^ It's the best of the lot, I think; the other two are a little... sketchy. :lol:

Thanks for all the tips, guys! I'll work on it in the future, definitely. ^_^

[ Went back to my hometown for a weekend; you wouldn't believe the memories it evoked. I felt like an eight-year-old playing in my neighbor's attic again, and pretending I ...

Lovely, Fab. "Heroin Chic" is definitely my favorite--you caught the moment beautifully.

D'pends on if he was a good friend or not, dunnit? - Jimtide Amory Na--I'd find some way to save us both, I would. - Torrom Amory Or you could ...

Pretty photos! The first is definitely your best. The ones of the house and plants are a little busy, and don't really have a focus, but the grounds there really ...

There is no such thing as a rhetorical question in poetry--or at least, there shouldn't be. The poem should make you want to answer, or at least contemplate an answer, ...

If a poet's serious about his work, he'll appreciate an in-depth (if harsh) critique appropriately. I know personally I tend to only point out the flaws I've found, and leave ...

Push away the plate: don't listen to what they say. He thinks you're pretty.

I really like the concept of the second photograph, but I think it would work more if it was straight. As it is, the whole picture is skewed and tipped ...

Wow! This is amazing, Nyame; very well done. I hope you post more soon. ^_^

Flame or ice? Flame or ice what ? Is there any point to that question at all? - Chauncy Forsythe Would you ever cheat on your significant other?