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Noise! There's got to be noise. Always, always, always. - Lynne Music is nice; Lynne's incessant cursing at her piece o' crap computer is better. - Marcy My roommate leaves ...

Even though I can see Manhattan from my bedroom window, it still takes me at least an hour to get in there (gah... traffic), and since most of the events ...

Obviously I've been reading too many of Brad's reviews, but I only have this to say: Please stop writing. Or at least put it on hold until after you've learned ...

Oh God. Anything but Barry Manilow. My mother listens to him obsessively, and she's... - Charlie ...a conniving, match-making succubus with a fetish for making her children suffer? - Marcy ...

Awsomwritter13, please do not flood the forums. It isn't couth. As to the poem itself, it makes little sense. What exactly are you trying to get across? At the moment ...

There is really no reason for you to be in a hurry; posting pieces in the forums isn't a race. It's not like you have to contend against deadlines or ...

The best descriptive word I can think of for this poem is "self-indulgent." Not only is it dotted with elementary grammatical and spelling mistakes ("know" should be "no," and spaces ...

Um.... *hugs Brad* Yay! Thank you! That works so much better than what I had... I really do appreciate it. :D

Sort of... it's more like how the world could have screwed everything up so badly. - Charlie What's your favorite quote?

Thanks for the input, guys! Now that I know what needs working on, I'll start rewriting this.

Heh... Captain Obvious. A friend of mine did this a few years back; pretty much, dress all in black and tape a sign to your chest saying, in big letters, ...

how to begin a poem when the subject no longer exists? so your fatalistic penchants, pretty gin-soaked boy, taste of snow and apples on my tongue. so you darkened my ...

Lestat . Vampires rock. - Lynne You would ask that, wouldn't you? Well. I plead the fifth. There are too many choices. - Marcy Faulkner. Anything by Faulkner. - Charlie ...

Tea! I like tea. Peppermint tea, especially. *nurses mug* Mmm. And parsnips are the devil's food. And I'm not talking scrummy chocolate cake. Wow... maybe I'm a little hungry... one ...

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