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Shafter >> I love it!

I'm not sure that normally I would enjoy this kind of poem, but given the circumstances behind it--and how well I can relate--I found it incredibly (almost freakishly) accurate. I'm ...

When she felt a slim hand alight on her shoulder, Finn didn't even need to lift her head to know that it belonged to the she-elf, Carmenia. For a moment ...

Well... it rhymes. If your aim was to have the last word of every line rhyme, you certainly have succeeded, and passably well--while quite often it lapsed into "bubblegum rhyme" ...

I'm confused as to what point you're trying to convey here. Oh, I know poetry doesn't have to have a point , per se, but it does need to have ...

I have to say, the second stanza is probably one of the most graceful, evocative descriptions of city life that I've read yet--and not just on this site. My only ...

There's no reason for all this!

No problem. First of all, Adrian, as a Paladin, has minor healing abilities. Seraph has the ability to drain life from someone else to help heal himself. If you've seen ...

Finn was shaking. Finn didn't like it when she shook. It usually meant something very, very bad was either happening, had happened, or was going to happen. Weel, sum'fin' bad ...

She woke, her eyes still sore.

The room at large--cave at large, rather--ignored Finn's query about the horses, but apparently getting out for food and water wouldn't be too big of a challenge since she soon ...

Finn opened her eyes what felt like mere seconds later to the sounds of an argument. She sat up sluggishly; she must have turned over in her sleep, as she ...

Ares >> great pic! yoha >> aww, you're so pretty! I love your beads, too. Heh... I'm not sure I'll ever be able to think of Bob without picturing a ...

Seraph looked strangely diminished without his armor, face pale and pained. As the she-elf--Carmenia--knelt beside the nobleman and began to examine his injuries, Finn looked away. Henry had been tend

Dead-on, Jack... I believe that was the general plan. ;) Though I take this opportunity to reiterate that I call the post in which they arrive at Sedgeley... it being ...