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You write poetry? I chew poetry! What a coincidence. ^^ Nice meeting you, thinker; I'm a junior mod here, and always available to answer any questions you might have. Want ...

I agree with Clau; it's too specific, and yet too far separated from the reader. What are we supposed to take from it? It's like a very vague, abbreviated character ...

4/10 - bit bland, yeah?

9/10 - I do love that poem. ^^

5/10 - 's okay, I guess. ^^

Hello, Jess! I'd like to preface this by saying that, for a twelve-year-old these are actually very, very good. I can't wait to see what you're writing in a couple ...

*laughs* Well, Colleen's stolen my comments before I could even think of them--right down to my favorite lines! Though I would like to point out that I also particularly enjoyed ...

You have given me in abunudance A childhood’s worth of broken promises My small hands stored them away Inside a diary garden I secretly tended Hoping that someday, your promises ...

...Well. That was an interesting read. Delving right in, then, shall we? Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I told her But beauty is in the eye of ...

Jack said it; fiction exposes life as it is, the good and the bad. That's part of the bad, just as someone being greedy, manipulative, or cruel is. A good ...

Gummy: Thanks! It's not supposed to flow quite perfectly, though; as Clau mentions, it's got a jumpy--or as I prefer, distracted--feel. The speaker's the quintessential bureaucrat, after all, with far

1. Scholarships are your best friend. 2. So are comfort foods. Do what makes you feel good, because chances are you're going to get very stressed with the application process ...

This was fantastic, Sam. I can't offer much criticism--a, I'm at work, and b, it doesn't need much (if any), and Clau already caught the typo--but I just wanted to ...

"A bond of paper, our human soul." I love these lines! This was really fantastic, Chandni; I love it. Though I have to agree somewhat with Claudette: you could have ...

This was... awful. I'm sorry. This reminded me of a chain letter, the sort you have to forward to so many friends or one of the dead lovers is going ...