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Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Battlestar Galactica! Battlestar Galactica! Oh-em-gee, Battlestar Galactica! - Benjamin Barrow I've always liked Jane Austen... - Ruth Novotny Being in a story is overrated. People expect things of yo
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Sachi needs your favorite quotes!
Go in fear of abstractions. - Ezra Pound All great truths begin as blasphemies. - George Bernard Shaw Everything can change, but not the language that we carry inside us, ...
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Bob, I think I may now officially have a Yewis crush on you.
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Ah, but see--while Emma may be boring (not to me, but I know others don't like more archaic styles), it's not a bad book. It's actually very subtly done with ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: The Grey Ghosts
I, too, am in! I just have to create a profile. >< I will edit it into this post when it's done. ^^
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Resident of my Fantasies
[I've run out of time, unexpectedly, and shall only be critiquing the first poem. Apologies!] Poem #1 I like the idea behind these; the malleability of dreams and the future ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: If Nobody Moved
Actually wiseman, what she uses is a slant rhyme--or, as some might know it, a half-rhyme. The words may end in an "f"/"v" sound (which really are pretty similar, anyway; ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: You're wrong, Teacher.
Hey, Kris! You've got a great poem here; the language, despite being so heavily formal (and almost archaic), works well, and you've obviously got the silvered tongue. I just have ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: The Family Tree
I. Will she go too? I’m waiting here in the room my grandmother decorated, where she saw her sons laid out and, mercifully, still beautiful. I kick my shoes away, ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: The Uprising
Shirin Bedros Shirin watched the gargoyle without really seeing him, or hearing a word of his speech. Her head was beginning to feel most curiously both heavy and light, and ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: The Uprising
Shirin Bedros It was over. She knew it must have been, when the gargoyle came to her and asked if he could dispose of the bodies, but then she had ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: The Uprising
Shirin Bedros When her stomach was emptied, Shirin straightened again and pressed a hand against her mouth. Hesitantly, she looked back at the men; the first, the one she had ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Survey
1.Total number of books you own? 427 last time I counted, but that was before last semester, so I've added at least thirty to that. 2.What was the last book ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: Lonely Bones
This is lovely, Mumble! There's such a natural flow and rhythm that although (like people have mentioned before) the slant-rhyme in the first two lines intimate a rhyme pattern that ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: Uprising Discussion
Happy-Ending Related? Acronym 'HER?' How delightfully sexist of you, Jigs. Some of us prefer satyrs to unicorns and rainstorms to rainbows. :P Please feel free to include Shirin in posts, ...
Dec 9, 2008
