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I agree. I sort of ran out of ideas and flopped.

I'm not in critique mode so I'll shower you wiht compliments. Very good. You portray Cat's childish umm..(that word i forgot where you are trusting and caring), yeah well that ...

"Azzia reluctantly shut the yellowing with age book." Try "Azzizia reluctantly shut the book that was yellowing with age." “You can talk!” she exclaimed. “What is it with you humans ...

Quote- "A single light floated around the building it’s guild was Old Man Hendrix’s the caretaker, he walked through the halls opening each door and checking every room." I'm not ...

I think the idea behind this story is very good. And you got good names! I am absolutely hopelesss at names and will spend an hour trying to think of ...

deleted for being disgustingly emo :? . *Fan*

Chapter 1- Magician thief When Seth came to he was confused at first. He wondered why he was lying on the floor and the stench of burning hung around him. ...

Great characters. But is it a prologue because i want to know how echleon came by the skull and how he's lived for so long.

My worst fault is the identity of my father. My best virtue is doing my upmost to fight against him. ~elayna

taken away

I am possesive of my freedom, nothing else. ~Mandalan I'm bloody possesive of my gold.~ Count Orlong What do yuo cherish the most?

Kill myself and be relieve the world of me. ~Elayna I doubt anyone could force me to swap bodies with them. Even if they were the most powerful being alive. ...

Sounds like a guy called constable has some sort of problem with a cloud. The Reluctant Hero

I would travel back in time to kill you in your most unsuspecting moment.~ Mandalan I would travel back in time and have never entered Greystone that night. ~ Seth ...

Get out an ecyclopaedia and find out what a jabberwock is. What would you ask for if you were given one wish?