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ooooooo. A tough one. The lemon has citric acid in it to destroy the carrot but the carrot has the power of vitamins to pull itself through. Soooooooo... Which one ...

Suddenly the old man was one his feet. I think you were meant to say on . You are very good at descriptions and I too found the descriptions of ...

A what?~Seth Have you ever tried spicy food and what did you think of it?

Because they're SHINY! :D Why did the chicken cross the road?

Makes me think of a red haired guy who lives an ordinary life. Most people would consider him boring at face value. Neve Alder

Protecting someone no matter what cost to yourself.~ Seth Caring for someone with all your soul.~ Neve Weakness.~ Kasper Love has infinite meanings. It is different for each person, there ...

I like your story so far, especially the ongoing fued between Niyana and Rame. Like lordess said there are a few problems with typos but a quick spell check will ...

I hate waking up... ~ Seth I can always rely on the bell tower to wake me up at exactly the right time ~ Neve I always wake up before, ...

Sounds like a story about a girl who serves some one important associated with water. Like the ruler of a land of waves or a water goddess. The darkness rising

I think of a character who might be descended of some strange race. He is a scholar and warrior who is interested in magic and has a troubled past. He ...

Makes me think of a woman with rich taste from France. Maybe an aristocrat and used to luxury. Kasper Veane (M)

He clenched them tighter, and lifted his right arm to cover his eyes. Clenched what. His hand or his eyes? If eyes, you don't clench them, you shut them tighter. ...

You won today but tomorrow i will be at the top!

8/10 not bad.

Well, I've edited it and put in a bit about there being no wards up when Seth and Cal break into the school though it will be explained properly in ...