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Ah, screw it, I'm entering. I need something to motivate me to write at the moment. I'll just fix something up with my I.T. teacher. I've never done it before ...

My quasi-quantum synapse situated in the fourth dimension rocks at Buchanan perspective, but unfortunately I lost touch with it when it fell into a wormhole...:D On a more serious note, ...

Hey phorcys, thanks for the crit. I am thinking of moving Seth to third person now seeing as my first draft got destroyed. The first person is starting to annoy ...

....I'd say characterisation with dialogue coming close second but I can get lazy. While my Mcs are pretty solid, good three dimensional characters (or so I've been told), I tend ...

Thank you for your sympathy! It is possibly one of the most annoying things in the world to have hard work ruined by defunct machines.

Hey, magiclukehutch. :) Agree with Sumi, there isn;t much to review here. Try to expand on this. But what I'm mainly worried about is the credibility of it. Most people ...

Who do I talk to my writing about? Well, mostly I flame about members of this site called YWS. I mean...who do they think they are? lol :D. Mostly I ...

Ello, Blue! :D Fan here. First I'll do a line by line... He had all ready published a psychological thriller novel and now he was trying to come up with ...

Nice title. But really it should be 'Hobo writer desecrates the art'. Anyhows... Just started this thing up to get my writing organised (right now it's a mess), show what ...

Yay, I'm mentioned! *feels loved* As to your question, in my personal opinions, I don' think that you should have it in first POV of a child because it would ...

Yes, i do know what looking for group is. Go Richard! *kills something*

heh. just gotta love orange. :D

'Ello Ashgan :D ! Saw this had no crits so I though I'd help out. First I'll do a line before the overall analysis. (Just to say, this font should ...

lol, this is great. Why don't you try out Harry Potter?

Ok Miss Lyn! *smile* ~ Rylie Wait a second, how do you know her name? We haven't been intoduced yet. ~ Elayna. One of the quirks of having a writer ...