Fall_Into_The_Sky

One word more Also the characters seem older. Especially because of the passionate kiss.. How old r they 13 ... 14?

Preety interesting topic. I've never heard of Morgan le Fay.

Wow! This is very well written. I love the ending. I can just picture her fading away only moments after their lips have touched.

I liked it. Would love it to be a bit longer though. Keep up the good work!

This was a very touching poem. There might be too many Mathew please don't leave me s though. But I don't know it might just make the poem. These are ...

I agree with the repitition of You. It kind of threw the poem off. Rewrite it a bit. Other than that it's preety good.

Good poem... It just needs to be written a little differently so that we can visualize him.

This was VERRY well written. And a very interesting story.

I really enjoyed this. Favorite part is when she rips the guy's head off.

I like it very much. It just needs to be spaced out more, and grammar etc...

4 The next day the house was vacant except for Dallas and Sophitia. Dallas awoke to sobs above. He dressed and pulled the ladder down. Climbing it he could hear ...

Ah I so love this story. I'm doing my own lichen story. It's based on a series of dreams over an expansion of about three years. Check it out is ...

[pre] Eighteen years had passed from that day. Sophitia as Cynthia had named her grew up into a strong child. Full of will and hope with the help of her ...

I very much enjoyed this. Her parents really should but out of her love life.

Chapter 1 : The Spectacle Xavier walked through the shadows of darkness. You neither could hear nor see the surroundings. The shadows encased him as a sheath on a blade. ...