Fall_Into_The_Sky

yea he's supposed to be mad looking lol vain actually and i made his head bigger than his body because i found the idea by looking at toucans.

thanks this is just my first story ever written i wrote it as a present to my bf

haha yea the story needs a lot of work

[pre]How? I stroll throughout the halls in quest of your features longing to suffer in your arms that effortless glance sends pins along my life why be so kind? In ...

thanks guys i'm new to poetry and story writing so bear with me untill i improve :)

wow harsh critiques lol but i'll take or advide and work on it

thanks i drew this at about 14 years of age i'm 17 now

[pre] It was a dark and damp night in the cave. Rena stirred sleepily in the distance. She dreamt of the night that her childhood was lost as she did ...

great story one thing though u need quotation marks around words spoken by characters.

oo more more i love romance novels

i thoroughly enjoyed that anymore to the story?

dang that story was good. i'm been addicted to it since i started reading it last nigh.

[pre]"Just Close Your Eyes" -- title of poem Just close your eyes And go to sleep Live to see another day To see the rains of may Why do we ...

By Angel V. As I go through the maze The winds whisper secrets and praise Go Left, Go Right, Up and Down It’s hard to know when to turn around ...

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