Fall_Into_The_Sky

f in ninjaas lol love the last part

addicted to ur romance stories

as usual exceptional short story

omg i'm crying that was such a beautiful story but so sad..

wow you can really write i'll be looking forward to more of this

thanks guys count are treasures not our pockets The above means to pay more attention to the treasures in life not the money you have attained.

i rated awesome

i like how its formatted keep up the good work

Very well written. I'm guessing that your character is seeing the ghost of the supposed couple. Look forward to seeing more to this story.

nice Jake sounds like the class clown but in a way different.

more please

great story i don't think you should have gotten in trouble for it it's a very nice story

thanks

Final draft: It was a dark and damp night in the cave. Rena stirred sleepily in the distance. She dreamt of the night that her childhood was lost as she ...

nice and well written