Fall_Into_The_Sky

I liked it. The comparison is a bit odd but in a way it fits. I can picture the hand shooting threw the window in the bubble heart. Transforming into ...

I very much enjoyed this Keep writing poetry I got the basis of the poem

Pretty good. No chatspeak. -- Snoink

[pre] Metallic Crystal Alliance Tonya scurried down the alley. She was to meet her lover. The baby was coming. Kane and she would meet secretly every few weeks. For a ...

dang! your seriously my favorite writer hear now :)

ahh vampires are my fav characters great idea making a story about a girl who changed

wow

oo I love a good vampire/werewolf story Please pm me when you post the next chapter

don't space it out as much overal great good to a story

Fix your grammar and puctuation and this will be a very good story.. When does part 2 come?

couples grammar errors still very well written

wow i get how the guy feels i love your work i don't have a good book to read so i've been reading forum stories i've read all u have ...

its rough but i like it i share your fear

short and sweet i love birds

Will you read this from me when I an dead ^should be am dead great poem